Riveascore · October 8, 2015 22:24 · Oct 8, 2015 · Oct 8, 2015
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+### Nav
+- What do their navbar dropdowns look like?
+- FeePay logo and navbar links should be aligned similar to rest of page, consistent margins (take Bootstrap's `.container` element as an example).
+
+**Better Nav Layout**:
+
+**logo**&emsp;link&emsp;link&emsp;link&emsp;link&emsp;link&emsp;**RequestDemo**
+
+---
+
+### Header (first image with laptop)
+- Add text shadow if none
+- Margins aren't consistent as well
+- Can't put my finger on it, but header feels a bit gross
+- Suggestion, could try blurred background image, Same content on left, mobile version of FeePay on right (within iPhone)
+- Lots of text right away is very daunting, it feels like I'm already having to work/think, a summarized list might be more welcoming rather than a paragraph
+
+---
+
+### Helping Families
+- The image top takes up a lot of space, it's a good concept, but try it rotated, [Content on Left  |   Fade into image]
+- Testimonials look good, here's another idea to play around with, could try gray background, [panel object](http://getbootstrap.com/components/#panels-alternatives) with FeePay orange color, top with text, then white panel footer with "person name" and below it "who they are"
+- Could use stock image of person as background for testimonials. This way it feels as if someone is actually talking about their experience.
+
+---
+
+### Results statistics
+- "Versatile integration", feels a bit interjected, also needs to be separated better
+
+---
+
+### Our products
+- Needs to be separated better
+- Make entire product container (icon/title/description/learnMore) clickable
+- Margin on "Learn More" feels a little inconsistent (more margin-top)
+
+---
+
+### Dedicated World-Class Support and Training
+- FeePay support image looks bad
+- Title, paragraph, and image spacing feels a little weird
+- There is a lot of mention of support, but no direct link in this section
+
+---
+
+### FeePay Has Simplified Processes
+- Debate button text "Get Started" vs. "Contact". Using "Get Started" feels more promising, "I can start now" vs. "I have to talk to someone" (feels customer support like)".
+
+---
+
+### Footer
+- Put "Administrator Support" in the middle so things align better and it is better aligned with "request demo".
+
+---
+
+### General
+- Example of products on mobile (screenshot within iPhone 6)
+- Have we considered a "Featured In" section? (featured in New York times etc.)
+- "Simplifying your school's processes". The title feels close, but it might be a bit better if we add "FeePay" into the mix. "FeePay is helping you do xyz". There may also be room for a 2nd action that FeePay does, "FeePay is helping you do abc and xyz".
+- In general, the section containing VersatileIntegration/RealDistricts/OurProducts feel too crammed together; they don't feel separate at all.
+- Overall, too many paragraphs for a marketing site, it feels like I'm reading a novel. You could try [panel](http://getbootstrap.com/components/#panels-alternatives) or list objects lead to more expansive pages about this material. If paragraphs are necessary, make them a bit wider so they look less daunting.
+- Extra Idea, make an image or info graphic comparing what your system will look like compared to how it likely looked before. [complex system of nodes, vs. 3-4 connections when using FeePay](https://www.intercom.io/)
+- Titles for each section: instead of just taglines and nouns, try statements that help the reader envision that they're doing something.
+- Analyze "simplifying your school's __" vs. "Simplify your school's __". The first one *does* feel like we're already doing it, which brings comfort, but the 2nd one makes the user feel excited about doing that thing: **"Oh, I can simplify my school's __"**
+- "Get Started" feels more welcoming than "Request a demo", making a request sounds like it will be a while before I can **actually start**
+- "HOW IT WORKS" button in the top header doesn't make sense.
+- I do like the capitalized text within buttons.
+- You're using white, light gray, and dark gray sections, but there's not enough variance. Try adding at least one more color such as FeePay orange as the background color for a section.
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